ನಾ ಕವಿ - 3

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ನೋಡದ ಅಣ್ಣನ ತಮ್ಮನಾಗುವೆವು
ತಮ್ಮತನವ ಮರೆತು ಹಲ್ಕಿರಿವೆವು!

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ಅಂತರ್ಜಾಲದ ಮುಂದೆ ಅಂತರ್ಮುಖಿ ಯಾಗುವೆವು
ಕಾಣದ ಕೈಗಳ ಕುಲುಕುವೆವು!

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ವಾರದ ನಿದ್ದೆ ವಾರಾಂತ್ಯದಲ್ಲಿ ಮಾಡುವೆವು
ದೆವ್ವದ ಸಮಯದಲ್ಲಿ ಊಟವ ಮುಗಿಸುವೆವು!

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ಮಾಯಾಮೃಗವಾಗಿದೆಯಾದರು
ಏಣಿಸುವೆವು ಜಣ ಜಣ ಕಾಂಚಾಣ
ಜಣ ಜಣ ಕಾಂಚಾಣ
--ಹರ್ಷ
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From: Harish C
Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2009 12:51 PM
To: 'ajith'; 'girya'; 'kempya'; 'mama'; 'mulla'; 'nitin'; 'vadi'
Subject: RE: Naa kavi - 3


Bhari bidle harsha kavi aagi bitti…

From: K, Sheela
Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2009 12:45 PM
To: Harsha M P
Subject: RE: Naa kavi - 3

Hey harsh

It has meaning but last thought does not seems to be rhyming like 1st 2 its just my thought ok

From: Harsha M P [mailto:harsha.mp@thoughtfocus.com]
Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2009 12:55 PM
To: K, Sheela
Subject: RE: Naa kavi - 3


thanks.. i always welcome my fres comments/suggestion.. i dont mind...

i just wanted to sound postive..... u can add ur lines to last one...

From: K, Sheela
Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2009 1:01 PM
To: Harsha M P
Subject: RE: Naa kavi - 3

SURE

How is this ……….Try this ……………….

ENI BADUKU ?

MAYAMRUGA AAGIDE ENDU YOCHISUVEVU

JANA JAN KANCHANADA SWARA KELI SWLAPA NITTUSIRU BIDUVEVU

Or
JANA JANA KANCHANA KANDU Nemmadi PADUVEVU

It too sounds some what Positive